Feed Back Evaluation - Improvements

when we put up our final piece we were subjected to criticism and also support. To improve on our piece we took some advice from other groups in our class and friends a family too see what we could do to improve. Here are some other screen shots of what people said about or piece.

Here are some of the things we need to improve on to get a higher mark in our piece and make it more professional then it already is:

The first thing we need to improve on is our sound. People said the effect were good about the volume of it needed to be worked on more. Some parts of it were too quite whilst others were to load. We need to get a balance of it so audio doesn't have to be changed whilst playing manually.

Another thing that we need to do as a group is cut some off the walking scenes. In our feedback from many sources people say we need to cut the footage down from the walking parts. They say it is very technically and professionally well done but the long amount of screen time of just walking bores people. We need to choose what shots need to be removed so that it stays interesting for the viewer.